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Coitus --- a haiku

God designed coitus
So that he could laugh at us
In silly positions

Written by gardenlover

Published 23rd Aug 2012

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Re: Coitus --- a haiku

24th Aug 2012 1:54am

hahaha That is cute and too funny, I think God does have a sense humor. Welcome to the DU, Nice piece.

Gypsy red

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Re: Coitus --- a haiku

18th Sep 2012 8:42pm

I love haikus. They are like puzzles. They have to fit together just right.
well done :)

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Re: Coitus --- a haiku

17th Oct 2012 3:43pm

Excellent!

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