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Kiss of my LOVE
[font=Verdana][i][b]Your beauty overwhelms me
As I wrap my arms around you
I press your softness tight
Great passion fills my inner being
I'm captured in your embrace
Your eyes control my very soul
The touch of your lips, heaven
Forever frozen in time
All else fades into nothing
As I wrap my arms around you
I press your softness tight
Great passion fills my inner being
I'm captured in your embrace
Your eyes control my very soul
The touch of your lips, heaven
Forever frozen in time
All else fades into nothing
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Re: Kiss of my LOVE
23rd Aug 2012 5:35am
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23rd Aug 2012 9:11am
wow is it amazing but i think it could have been made a bit longer but other wise it is great :)
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re: Re: Kiss of my LOVE
24th Aug 2012 1:17am
Re: Kiss of my LOVE
24th Aug 2012 6:13am
Re: Kiss of my LOVE
24th Aug 2012 10:53pm
Re: Kiss of my LOVE
2nd Sep 2012 7:01am
Short and sweet, gets to the point and expresses how you feel with more depth to the words than stanzas full of empty words could hope to capture and embrace... jj
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