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Falling Down, Freeing Me

Make it stop
The pain within life
Beats on my walls
Trying to break
What is left
Of my pathetic existence
Louder it pounds
As my ears ring
Blood running down my face
Surely enough it wishes to get a way out too
My freedom
My sanctuary
My Peaceful place
Is falling to the ground
Crumbling
Bit by bit
The pounding hits harder
Letting me know
My time here is up
Just when I think
It can't get any worse
My peaceful place falls
Hard to the ground
Crumbling above
It falls down
As I look up
Just in time
To see it hit me
Blackness
Silence
Nothingness
The pain ended
As I got up
To walk away
I knew I was finally free
Written by PassionOfVengeance (Jacqueline R)
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