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White Capped Laughter
Longing eases as tip of toe
softly touches water
ripples in it's wake
scent of nature
surrounds as
breeze envelops me
eyes close in
contentment
dragonflies skitter
soft splash of
feet
tickle the lake
its belly
white capped
laughter
a smile touches my lips
giving and receiving
without pause
on my back
how the sun
loves the clouds
they hide her
secrets
and giggle in reprise
arms outstretched
I feel I could
hug the world
give unto others
take away
their tears
the leaves of the trees
say think small
cannot do it all
if a smile comes
to but one
your purpose fills
softly touches water
ripples in it's wake
scent of nature
surrounds as
breeze envelops me
eyes close in
contentment
dragonflies skitter
soft splash of
feet
tickle the lake
its belly
white capped
laughter
a smile touches my lips
giving and receiving
without pause
on my back
how the sun
loves the clouds
they hide her
secrets
and giggle in reprise
arms outstretched
I feel I could
hug the world
give unto others
take away
their tears
the leaves of the trees
say think small
cannot do it all
if a smile comes
to but one
your purpose fills
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Re: White Capped Laughter
21st Aug 2012 3:03am
"the leaves of the trees
say think small
cannot do it all"
nature boy there you go again banging on your chest asking; where is my Jane? lolol
love it, love it you never disappoint with your lovely nature pieces.
Red
say think small
cannot do it all"
nature boy there you go again banging on your chest asking; where is my Jane? lolol
love it, love it you never disappoint with your lovely nature pieces.
Red
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re: Re: White Capped Laughter
21st Aug 2012 7:59pm
That's me; nature boy in every way... except I gotta have electricity and indoor plumbing.
Thanks!!!
Thanks!!!
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2012 6:37am
Yes indeed Soul Man....the great outdoors!
Skittering dragonflies no less....
Strider :)
Skittering dragonflies no less....
Strider :)
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21st Aug 2012 8:00pm
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21st Aug 2012 7:59am
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22nd Aug 2012 9:08am
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22nd Aug 2012 3:39pm
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22nd Aug 2012 10:17pm
:P No, no...
phantasmagorical: adj. - characterized by fantastic imagery and incongruous juxtapositions
quite fitting :D
phantasmagorical: adj. - characterized by fantastic imagery and incongruous juxtapositions
quite fitting :D
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Re: White Capped Laughter
22nd Aug 2012 10:50pm
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2012 6:50pm
A truly talented write-great visuals and an air of breezy peacefulness...great flow too
and how sweet an end
if a smile comes
to but one
your purpose fills
excellent!!!!
peace, miki
and how sweet an end
if a smile comes
to but one
your purpose fills
excellent!!!!
peace, miki
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26th Aug 2012 00:49am
Re: White Capped Laughter
1st Sep 2012 9:10pm
very lovely, indeed, i agree with the others that this is excellent...i too, loved how you ended it...great wonderful poem! Faith
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1st Sep 2012 9:44pm