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From Dark To Dawn....... (a collab by Firebyrd and Musically Mr M)
Tonight....
My thoughts take me on a journey
as I listen to the words
my far away love
speaks to me...
Killing me softly with his words
as he strums adjectives and verbs into
a sultry spell like I've never heard...
Tonight...
I contemplate this mans light
as his energy shines through space and time
From his sensual lips...I feel ....high
I just know this feels so damn good..
So please don't ask me why
As I have no answer...
When he speaks,
he makes my “punani” weep
He makes me wanna' be his "private dancer"
I feel every word he speaks to my inner spirit
I just wish he was near in my ear when I hear it
Tonight....
I know that distance makes the heart grow fonder
as I stare off into this great blue yonder sky
Tonight I feel the "need" so deep...
All I can do is sigh....
.........It's morning. I could not open
these dreaming eyes of mine
though all my senses were alive.......
I felt your hands; delicate fingers upon my chest
Caressing my nipples gently.
Your lips against my ear..........waking me with words
expressing your love and desire.
Words that burned deep into my soul.
I melt.........
…..........inside as so many feelings
that lay dormant have come alive
and my heart smiles....
Your music stirs my emotion
into a swirling tempest .
My cock overflows...........
….......thick white foam floating
against your solemn shores
at the days dawning......
…......I feel so divine.
Lady, come and take my love
Spread your wings upon my naked body...........then
…......with thunderous aplomb,
I shall enter your temple
and make you mine.
Writers Note: ( This was posted here because I really couldn't find the right category for it but then again, maybe this "is" true eroticism......you decide )
Published 8th Aug 2012
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8th Aug 2012 6:49pm
8th Aug 2012 10:36pm
Adele, after reading two of the most unique erotic creations from your repertoire, your comment here means a lot : )
8th Aug 2012 7:00pm
8th Aug 2012 7:15pm
Thanks GG. Damn........your new av is what's hot. What has gotten into you or perhaps "whom" ? : )
Anonymous
8th Aug 2012 7:41pm
MrM,
For what you two are playing off each other....you have definitely found the right place! A very HOT write for both of you!
tornado
For what you two are playing off each other....you have definitely found the right place! A very HOT write for both of you!
tornado
8th Aug 2012 7:51pm
Got to bow down to the Windy 1. Thanks Tornado Man. We are not worthy.......LOL
8th Aug 2012 9:12pm
I really enjoyed working with you on this....
it was a pleasure and a joy...
You bring even more fire outa this Ol Byrd.
it was a pleasure and a joy...
You bring even more fire outa this Ol Byrd.
Pssssst............you ain't old babygirl by no stretch of the imagination ; ) (........and my imagination is quite active)
8th Aug 2012 9:41pm
Two inks merged together creating a sultry and steamy write! I know the craving you depicted all too well! Sexy collab you two! Nicely done!
8th Aug 2012 10:33pm
Thank you Lady Rain.........you know how much I respect your comments. Your writing is Le Creme'.....
8th Aug 2012 10:36pm
Indeed two passionate pens collide and the conflagration created in words is very bright. Well done you two, keep up the good work.
Gypsy Red
Gypsy Red
10th Aug 2012 1:51am
you guys should get a room and put these words into action lol I enjoyed this piece:) thanks!
