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everyday poetry
before you blow this off, read what I have to say before you go and ignor me saying "this is not poetry". Poetry can be very structured. It can have virtually no structure. People will read it either way and chances are that one person at least with think "that is poetry". I usually write from inspiration, a thought, a dream. This, my fellow humans, is an example of poetry at its most interesting form. I was texting a person, we shall call him bob, and this occored (I will put it below). I wanted to make it a poem...but I see it as one already. Take a look.
Bob:lies are just truths in disguise
Me:no, truth is a whole bunch of small lies sewn together with reality
Bob: but reality itself is a lie so truth is just one big lie
Me: the truth resides in identifying lies
Bob: but lies and truths are just opinions and words
Me: words are delivered from liars and theives
Bob: theives are the best liars therfore they have the most gorgous words
Me: theives steal from the beautiful people and mix their love and perfection with the filth of their own world, so their gorgous words are tainted with that of the most vial.
Bob: well then are you a theif or a beautiful person
Me: I am a theif of your heart
Bob:lies are just truths in disguise
Me:no, truth is a whole bunch of small lies sewn together with reality
Bob: but reality itself is a lie so truth is just one big lie
Me: the truth resides in identifying lies
Bob: but lies and truths are just opinions and words
Me: words are delivered from liars and theives
Bob: theives are the best liars therfore they have the most gorgous words
Me: theives steal from the beautiful people and mix their love and perfection with the filth of their own world, so their gorgous words are tainted with that of the most vial.
Bob: well then are you a theif or a beautiful person
Me: I am a theif of your heart
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