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Bird
I'm a bird
I'm flying
I see something i want
I fly towards it
I didn't see the clear glass
I smacked into it
I fall
I'm on the ground
I get up
I have a limp
My wing is hurt
It will take some time to mend before I can fly again.
I'm flying
I see something i want
I fly towards it
I didn't see the clear glass
I smacked into it
I fall
I'm on the ground
I get up
I have a limp
My wing is hurt
It will take some time to mend before I can fly again.
Published 1st Aug 2012
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2nd Aug 2012 00:52am
3rd Sep 2012 6:26pm
3rd Sep 2012 6:29pm
So many of the lines being complete sentences close together has an interesting affect here for some reason, each line being a little statement in itself. Um...you change tenses a bit, back and forth between past and present.
