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Invisable
I step, I breathe
but no one can see
I listen, I talk
but everyone mocks me
Did I do something wrong
I've been waiting so long
for someone to understand me
A friend, buddy, or pal
someone who accepts me.
but no one can see
I listen, I talk
but everyone mocks me
Did I do something wrong
I've been waiting so long
for someone to understand me
A friend, buddy, or pal
someone who accepts me.
Published 1st Aug 2012
| Edited 1st Mar 2013
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1st Aug 2012 10:16pm
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5th Sep 2012 12:21pm
your self confidence .. fuck them, believe in you and people will do the same ;) you are your own destiny..
5th Sep 2012 8:42pm
Oh thanks :)I wrote this a couple of years ago, trust me I'm stronger now
2nd Jan 2013 8:18am
It's interesting to note, that "except" is as in "exception," as in, someone or something that doesn't fit with the rest in a group or a pattern. I think you were waiting for someone who "accepts" you, not "excepts" you.
Anonymous
28th Feb 2013 2:47am
I can relate to this...quite often
And you word it nicely....
And you word it nicely....
