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Hate, Love, Regret
Hate, Love, Regret
You, Me; Upset
I offered you me
All you could see
I had offered my heart
and thats just the start
But it was not enough
Because I wasn't tough?
Or because I was too tough?
I had changed for you
Yet you made me blue
I even still now love you
Take back the adieu
please.
You, Me; Upset
I offered you me
All you could see
I had offered my heart
and thats just the start
But it was not enough
Because I wasn't tough?
Or because I was too tough?
I had changed for you
Yet you made me blue
I even still now love you
Take back the adieu
please.
Published 30th Mar 2010
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31st Mar 2010 2:28am
31st Mar 2010 10:45pm
I just hope you don't feel the 1st and 3rd feelinfs too much. Thanks for the comment!
5th Apr 2010 1:04am
I agree, the emotion is really powerful here which contrasts so strongly with the almost nursery rhyme-ish rhythm and rhyme.
Great job :) x
Great job :) x
