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I Could Only Watch
I could only watch as my world collapsed around me
I have seen some shit that no one should ever have to see
They say it takes fewer muscles to smile than to frown
But How could i smile when my life was turned up side down
No one really knows what they have until its gone trust me that is true
And it leaves you with an empty feeling and you dont know what to do
I took my life for granet then i lost everything that matters
Life is a frigile thing and its never pretty when it shatters
Im trying to pick up the pieces but there are so many to find
Everything i know is gone and its making me lose my mind
I would give anything for things to go back to the way they were
But that is never going to happen of that i am sure
I have seen some shit that no one should ever have to see
They say it takes fewer muscles to smile than to frown
But How could i smile when my life was turned up side down
No one really knows what they have until its gone trust me that is true
And it leaves you with an empty feeling and you dont know what to do
I took my life for granet then i lost everything that matters
Life is a frigile thing and its never pretty when it shatters
Im trying to pick up the pieces but there are so many to find
Everything i know is gone and its making me lose my mind
I would give anything for things to go back to the way they were
But that is never going to happen of that i am sure
Published 19th Jul 2012
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19th Jul 2012 9:45pm
19th Jul 2012 10:40pm
20th Jul 2012 1:28am
Other than a few type o's I like this poem good write!
awe i liked it better when you were "frigile...granet" it made the story more interesting and cement has feelings to you know!how would you like to be called a type o?
awe i liked it better when you were "frigile...granet" it made the story more interesting and cement has feelings to you know!how would you like to be called a type o?
