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mossy sodden blocks
mossy sodden blocks
kids pretend are grenades
they throw `em `gainst rocks
the soil explodes in a haze
animal, vegetable, mineral
grind together
rendered pure vapor
blasphemy, maybe
but truth is truth
a tiny microcosm
of Towers failed
violence is violence
no matter the scale
Published 19th Jul 2012
| Edited 20th Jul 2012
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20th Jul 2012 3:16am
20th Jul 2012 3:35am
Thank You --
the photo is meant to shock ----
when a child throws a ball of dirt
The same thing happens as 9/11
only on a relatively insignificant scale.
Unfortunately, we can see, even in children,
our capacity for violence.
thank you for reading....
the photo is meant to shock ----
when a child throws a ball of dirt
The same thing happens as 9/11
only on a relatively insignificant scale.
Unfortunately, we can see, even in children,
our capacity for violence.
thank you for reading....
Anonymous
20th Jul 2012 5:25am
i wrote a poem bout this i don't know where it is tho strong content <3
20th Jul 2012 5:51am
Anonymous
20th Jul 2012 9:49pm
Very well done drivel.
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 1:14pm
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15th Jun 2013 7:27pm
Hi --
Im not tying ---
Im saying it .......
thanks for reading..........
Im not tying ---
Im saying it .......
thanks for reading..........
17th Oct 2013 10:26pm
While I understand your point-of-view, and your form is good, that's a terrible analogy. There is a HUGE difference between different kinds of violence, and some of it is necessary.
