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Vessel
The tide rises and falls
within each breath.
Moistened lips of dew drop kisses
invade my sanctuary with
a welcomed intrusion.
In voices
a melody plays,
intoxicating ears to illusion.
Touches that burn through forever,
gaining nearness of proximity.
Slightness of air passes between us,
secrets shared,
wet without a touch.
Anticipation heightens,
gentle intensity.
Carried on mended wings of hope,
stowed deep within
this vessel
called....
my Heart
within each breath.
Moistened lips of dew drop kisses
invade my sanctuary with
a welcomed intrusion.
In voices
a melody plays,
intoxicating ears to illusion.
Touches that burn through forever,
gaining nearness of proximity.
Slightness of air passes between us,
secrets shared,
wet without a touch.
Anticipation heightens,
gentle intensity.
Carried on mended wings of hope,
stowed deep within
this vessel
called....
my Heart
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Re: Vessel
Anonymous
14th Jul 2012 11:08am
Beautiful Soul Man....thump thump!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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14th Jul 2012 11:11am
Nice seeing you this morn Bro. We early risers do get rewarded! A wonderful day be yours
Vessel
14th Jul 2012 11:17am
"Carried on mended wings of hope stowed deep within" I like that very much. Beautiful Ken. :)
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re: Vessel
14th Jul 2012 11:50am
Welcome to DUP, Crimson Red. Do share your creations and explore the immense talent and soul in this family.
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14th Jul 2012 11:52am
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14th Jul 2012 12:21pm
Lovely.
"Moistened lips of dew drop kisses"
A beautiful thought.
This has a peaceful feel to it as well :)
"Moistened lips of dew drop kisses"
A beautiful thought.
This has a peaceful feel to it as well :)
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re: Re: Vessel
14th Jul 2012 12:46pm
Good morning. Thank you Rachel. I love the morning dew kissing the earth and to feel that same replenishing, coolness from lips...divine.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Re: Vessel
14th Jul 2012 12:50pm
Mr. ken you never disappoint, this piece was wonderfully sweet and a pleasure to read.
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14th Jul 2012 12:53pm
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2012 3:17pm
well, what more can I say...it has already been said...thank you for sharing such lovely poetry
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15th Jul 2012 3:53am
Re: Vessel
14th Jul 2012 11:42pm
In voices(and in words)a melody plays.
It plays well here SMK.
And that which plays so well does stay to play again within within the mind.
That MoJo of yours writes well and well again. always a pleasure to pay a visit to your page
It plays well here SMK.
And that which plays so well does stay to play again within within the mind.
That MoJo of yours writes well and well again. always a pleasure to pay a visit to your page
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15th Jul 2012 3:52am
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2012 12:28pm
This is so well written and moving..I can only say well Done! Peace, Miki
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