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Fuck Me Up...
Fuck me up, one more time.
Show me how you'll make me mind.
Force me down this one last time.
Hit me hard, I can take it.
Baby, I know you can.
All you gotta' do is swing your hand.
I'm your slut,
I'm your whore.
And I've been a naughty girl.
Tease me,
Don't please me.
Make me beg.
Because--
You know...
It makes me wet.
Show me how you'll make me mind.
Force me down this one last time.
Hit me hard, I can take it.
Baby, I know you can.
All you gotta' do is swing your hand.
I'm your slut,
I'm your whore.
And I've been a naughty girl.
Tease me,
Don't please me.
Make me beg.
Because--
You know...
It makes me wet.
Published 22nd Mar 2010
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25th Mar 2010 10:08pm
Haha, such a releasing poem. Hiting/Biting/pain-inflicting fetishes are amazing.
25th Mar 2010 11:02pm
As you can tell, I do too. hehe
Thank you for the comment, I am glad you like it!
Thank you for the comment, I am glad you like it!
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29th Apr 2010 00:45am
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29th Apr 2010 9:51pm
the poem draws reader's attention; it is sexy in its brutality and beautiful in its honesty. the lay out is well structured, even though you could have done it unconsciously. enjoyed reading it
8th Jul 2010 3:16pm
The structure I actually did without realizing it. I'm unsure of how, but I was just going with the flow. Letting the poem lead me you could say. Thank you for the compliment. :)
20th May 2010 5:30am
I LIKED IT...WAS DEFINITELY SOMETHING THAT BROUGHT BACK MEMORIES. IT WAS REALLY VIVID! GOOD JOB
