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My Reality
Days come and go
Exhausted and well-spent
From work and thoughts of wanting to be dead
Life, such a struggle
A daily compromise
Waiting for the next ball to drop
Hoping for happiness
Not my immediate demise
Though we all know happiness is fleeting
..as elusive as the wind
Acknowledgement of Worth
..now becomes a lament not a wait
Wanting to be irrevocably needed,
Inexplicably loved
Published 2nd Jul 2012
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2nd Jul 2012 7:32pm
Just love the fact that this is short and straight to the point. Is this supposed to sound desperate, but what do you mean in the begining when you say days come and go exhausted and well spent. If it is exhausting and well spent then it shouldnt lead you to wanting to die... right?
3rd Jul 2012 3:12pm
No not desperate but accepting. Time passes, one day leads into the other-- days come and go. During these days im exhausted and it wears me out---its as if whats the point of living if my days are constantly without reprieve hence thoughts of wants to be dead.
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2012 00:37am
"Wanting to be irrevocably needed,
Inexplicably loved"
These words blend together like rich, velvet cream..
Inexplicably loved"
These words blend together like rich, velvet cream..
3rd Jul 2012 10:43pm
