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Rass
Like a supernova,
a star,
this is catastrophic.
Files my inhibitions into smaller boxes behind the dresser and marks
all the latest works with paint blots and little dots. I used
a yellow highlighter pen.
I don't care
if hair of the dog doesn't work.
a star,
this is catastrophic.
Files my inhibitions into smaller boxes behind the dresser and marks
all the latest works with paint blots and little dots. I used
a yellow highlighter pen.
I don't care
if hair of the dog doesn't work.
Published 30th Jun 2012
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30th Jun 2012 2:00pm
Read several times in a row. Seems a controlled mania. I feel a certain anxiety, sort of answered at the end w hair of dog. Usual alcohol reference,but could refer to other intoxicants,if any I sense other..not tweeking per say as it does seem organized,but similar rushing and blotting and highlighting,like you have this thing you have to point out NOW..first couple lines open up then build up then explode into catastrophe,reminds me of rolling...forgive an ol fool clearly pre occupied w altered states... Rass, what does that mean?
5th Jul 2012 10:38pm
It means 'ass' and yes, I was rather tee-ed off that day from a certain sickness, a lot like jealousy.
