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Observational Poems
could you
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could you
Becouse
you are a person
doesn’t mean
you have graduated
to becoming
a human being
Written by
drone
Published
26th Jun 2012
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Re: could you
opheliac
26th Jun 2012 9:18pm
i see what you mean but unfortunately is not very obvious in the way you wrote it. Small changes would do the trick though.
there's a small typo: first word: because
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drone
26th Jun 2012 10:01pm
thank you
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Re: could you
CAOS737
27th Jun 2012 4:34am
MY WEEKLY VERSION OF A ZEN LIKE ILLUSTRATION... NICE!
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drone
27th Jun 2012 8:43am
thank you
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