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Diversity of LOVE
Loving you is BLISS and PAIN,
It is LIFE and DEATH...
a DREAM come true
and a living NIGHTMARE...
It is my FATE,
and a CHOICE...
You put me in HEAVEN,
and suddenly dropped me to HELL...
Your love is PURE,
but rather DECEIVING...
The sweetest DEPICTION of my soul
a CONTRAST to my consciousness,
Loving you is FOREVER,
but when love is lost it has to END.
It is LIFE and DEATH...
a DREAM come true
and a living NIGHTMARE...
It is my FATE,
and a CHOICE...
You put me in HEAVEN,
and suddenly dropped me to HELL...
Your love is PURE,
but rather DECEIVING...
The sweetest DEPICTION of my soul
a CONTRAST to my consciousness,
Loving you is FOREVER,
but when love is lost it has to END.
Published 20th Jun 2012
| Edited 28th Jun 2012
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23rd Jun 2012 5:12pm
Well. Your poem is screaming. I like it, especially "fate" and "choice." Can someone be "rather deceiving" or just "deceiving?" Doesn't love have "bounds" even when it is there? I certainly appreciate your numerous contrasts. The trick, perhaps, is to be in the midst, the middle, of them.
marcella1
marcella1
24th Jun 2012 4:42pm
I appreciate your crit.. My poem talks about a the person I really love, her love is pure but after some time it turned out her love is rather deceiving than pure. I thought her love for me will never end we used to believe in forever but one day she no longer feel the same thing. It feels like am gonna love her FOREVER, until now am still in love but what should I do? I lost her love so it has to end.. :( but let me thank you for appreciating my poem :D it means alot to me :D thank you very much marcella <3
