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Knowing
To who we are
And what we are
Wisdom comes
and wisdom goes
A fiery angst for knowing
Rises and flourishes
In our mortal bloody veins
Whether it be about love
The mystifying afterlife
Or the secret to fame
A crack of a whip
Sets all things straight
yet will keep us bent
Forever
Until we break
The unwritten law
Of doubtlessly knowing
And what we are
Wisdom comes
and wisdom goes
A fiery angst for knowing
Rises and flourishes
In our mortal bloody veins
Whether it be about love
The mystifying afterlife
Or the secret to fame
A crack of a whip
Sets all things straight
yet will keep us bent
Forever
Until we break
The unwritten law
Of doubtlessly knowing
Published 13th Jun 2012
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13th Jun 2012 2:17pm
Anonymous
24th Aug 2012 11:05pm
Miss Raven,
Out of the mist I allways find some clarity and this time is no different.
I went away for a while, and on my return found reading your catalogue a special moment in my life. You and your writing has evolved beautifuly into wonderful poetry that is a joy to read.
I might if I may mention that I think you do yourself no favours starting each line with a cap, but that be just a technical nit and definately a personal opinion.
I thank you, for the wonderful words have written, they are special to me.
Baie dankie
-x-
Out of the mist I allways find some clarity and this time is no different.
I went away for a while, and on my return found reading your catalogue a special moment in my life. You and your writing has evolved beautifuly into wonderful poetry that is a joy to read.
I might if I may mention that I think you do yourself no favours starting each line with a cap, but that be just a technical nit and definately a personal opinion.
I thank you, for the wonderful words have written, they are special to me.
Baie dankie
-x-
