random haiku

the moon is very bright,
shining through the trees,the light,
it lit up the night.

i see the puppies,
their smiles so very very bright,
i love it so much.

oh the wonderful light,
the trees move in the light breeze,
its so light gentle.

the shadeis blocking,
the light is so very warm,
but i cant feel it

i cant see the sun,
its a solar eclipse,
no its not, im crazy!

i sit in this place,
and i dont know what to do,
i dont like it here.
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