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Naked Men Eat FleshFruit of/in Florida, All Throw'd'Way
Blessed be
thee he or she
who go on in to
th'bloodeath'fray
bared naked...
oldbroke teeth
& wasted limbs,
man'gled minds&
firestorm egos
they's onliest weapons.....
~~~~~2012jun3dkzk~~~~~~
all
i'mages wit dkzkpooms was
made to reality by dkzkHisSelf \\\
thee he or she
who go on in to
th'bloodeath'fray
bared naked...
oldbroke teeth
& wasted limbs,
man'gled minds&
firestorm egos
they's onliest weapons.....
~~~~~2012jun3dkzk~~~~~~
all
i'mages wit dkzkpooms was
made to reality by dkzkHisSelf \\\
Published 3rd Jun 2012
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3rd Jun 2012 3:19pm
3rd Jun 2012 3:31pm
3rd Jun 2012 5:41pm
One of your finer comments-turned-poem. Maybe attach it to the original as a final verse. Maybe, might... iduuno.
3rd Jun 2012 7:00pm
good idear....
if i do it, &also leave it as a standing poom, it'll be like 'plagiarizing' myself
YES!!
oshit...4got2take my meds...eXc'use me.
if i do it, &also leave it as a standing poom, it'll be like 'plagiarizing' myself
YES!!
oshit...4got2take my meds...eXc'use me.
