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Eyes Are Louder
say hello eyes
H
E (open)
L (lids)
L (slowly)
O ....
OUCH!
the meeting is painful
like oven hot to touch
(a bit of e.e cummings inspiration)
H
E (open)
L (lids)
L (slowly)
O ....
OUCH!
the meeting is painful
like oven hot to touch
(a bit of e.e cummings inspiration)
Published 1st Jun 2012
| Edited 9th Jun 2012
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1st Jun 2012 6:23pm
I'm not sure if i was supposed to laugh, but i did and it was a quite enjoyable little poem XD
Good going!
(I love e.e cummings)
Good going!
(I love e.e cummings)
1st Jun 2012 11:37pm
