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Feminine Fire
Another love died
Before it was born
I opened my heart
With hope and desire
I should not have broken
The promise I'd sworn
To protect my heart
From feminine fire
10/31/2001
Before it was born
I opened my heart
With hope and desire
I should not have broken
The promise I'd sworn
To protect my heart
From feminine fire
10/31/2001
Published 30th May 2012
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16th Apr 2016 7:12pm
16th Apr 2016 8:17pm
18th May 2016 7:21pm
Stillborn love hurts just as much as realized love. The difference is that you're left with all the questions of what COULD have been. And those often haunt just as badly. :(
18th May 2016 8:19pm
Indeed it is so! Thank you for commenting Willow!!! You must be dissecting my poems by the least commented on, lol.
I appreciate the reads! 😃
JJ
I appreciate the reads! 😃
JJ
18th May 2016 8:33pm
Actually, I started at the beginning of your postings and am working my way forward to the most recently posted. Methodical and efficient, that's me. Sad...I really should shake things up a bit more.
