SELF EXPLORATION

Interestign poem, I the last verse talks about masturbation as you seem to be missing someone's touch. Enjoyed it.

Thanks. I love the sinful feeling of missing someone and then making up for it with my own sinful touch..

What I like about this poem, and I'm probably wrong but I enjoyed that your feelings for whoever you're missing aren't purely sexual. Of course they are sexual, since you're "self-exploring", but when you say "my mind aches for you" instead of saying something about thinking what you'd do to them or vise versa. When most writers in DU write about masturbation, they usually are touching themselves thinking about having sex with another person.
I could be wrong about your poem, but from what I got, it's a very refreshing poem about masturbation. I like it. Thanks!

thanks for sharing your thoughts. I completely agree with your analysis.

I love to masterbate, whoa hoooo, no but, you did a really good job nice write!
Peace~
Heather

So honest! I like that

Thanks Jane

Fantastic! Like I say: "if you can't play with someone, why not yourself." No complications with just you. LOL

Hey there, aussieinmumbai, I will tell you what I like about this poem. . .it's raw honesty.  Not only was the poem short lived, its flow was even toned and it complimented everything that needed to be said.  Great write!  

Overwhelmed by these words of encouragement...thanks

AussieInMumbai

Welcome to DUP. And what a way to announce
yourself.:)

Once romantic, once erotic this is a fine
balance you have managed to achieve in this
short poem. Love the build up and the tangible
ache you have reflected here.

The last line is a ton of bricks.

Good job. Godspeed.

Sumeet

Thanks Sumeet. When you encourage a greenhorn with such kind words, it means a lot to me. I am also a fan of your works but do not consider qualified enough to comment on these, except that i liked them

Believe me. I am still in the starting line.
The gun has been long fired. Have not taken
the sprint. That is a myth. Anyone who is a reader, can share and suggest. I am a university dropout anyway. Qualification just went out of the room.

Please feel free to comment and share your views.

Best,


Sumeet

Hi friend..this is amazing and beautifull..It is very creative and unique as well! Fcxx

Wonderful and honest poetry. I like it.

Simple, sleek, sexy and sultry :). Loved it can so relate

thanks so much

This poem emotes such beauty.! I love the candor, the topic...Its a very fine piece. Hot;)

Very nice, my favorite verse was ..."I look for your presence in the deathly stillness of the night
yet in your absence, its me whom I will touch ". it goes behind thoughts and desire to true yearning for another makes a steamy, beautiful,and honest read.

thanks to all of you who have found it worthy to leave a comment. Its a tribute to those lonely souls who seek solace in the solitude

Love how your hands play the part of the one you seek or rather yearn to touch. but seems as though its more then just a sexual feel or connection you want. but you crave for  that emotional meaning going deeper then just lust...

maybe im worng lol
love the write though c:

This one is sad. It's really sad.

why do you think it sad...

Well i'm certainly glad i stopped by! i love reading little intimate pieces like this, well done!

I feel a bit overwhelmed by your words, mememe because your intimate poems are truly great

Great, reminds me of the one I posted "Alone In Bed"

The pendulum of desire and adoration tinkering in the moments when you permit yourself the joy of connection picked up momentum to the eventual release.... i must admit i have never read a write on this subject before (well not knowingly)  i found it a liberating...tyvm

thanks synthetic. As always these words from you are uplifting. I sent you a message, thanking you

I like

I like this poem very much because the one I love is far away from me at the moment and I know he touches himself when he thinks of me and yearns for my touch. Interestingly I can feel him whenever he does it and then I am inclined to do likewise or at least enjoy the phenomenal sensations thusly imparted upon me through the ethers as it were.....

thanks a lot sharing your views on this poem..scarlet

very enticing loved your word play! great read!!

Perfect

i have sent you a message

I like your poetry, this poem shows me you love yourself first get to know yourself before sharing, and you can also identify negativity more easily without causing confusion..Great I liked it!!

thanks so much angeliki

smokin' hot last line!!!

The fire is spreading....
I am burnt by my own touch

speechless
i think i'm swept away by my own touch.
WOOOW!!!!!  

nice.

i like this one. this one is good. I like this one better than the longer ones.

So sinful and juicy like it :)

the fire is spreading faster now my batteries are a disaster, hot one :)

Woow, I am loooving this like tomorrow is of no existence. No words pure beauty.

thanks noire...am honoured by the kind words

Lovely... I think we all touch ourselves wishing for it to be someone else’s hands.. well done.

thanks a lot

Very nice.... Sexy!