It's all in your mind

Everything is in the mind.

I think you think too much like me.

I try not to think but then I begin thinking and shit like this comes out of me. Thanks man.

hello dearest Keith I can confess I sometimes wonder but I have always heard a spirit with me long before I heard of church great write ❤️

Thank you Brenda for the comments and feedback. xoxo

You sound as Pasolini saying Hope is a terrible thing.. a political thing n watnots..

yes i agree  but only to the title n last liner;)  
cos this petite mind sees a sea of hope as a good thing . full of  suspended oxygen n  energetic verve n breezy wave. just me ;)

loved your strong take.. makes sense in a politic world full of lies.. powerful write dear Keith xx

Thank you Uma. I appreciate it. xoxo

Sounds like mental preparedness before going into divorce court. LOl.  

That could very well be. Who needs divorce court. Take her out on a final date and off her!
Thanks dude for the comments!

Passionately penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian.

You are right, dear Keith, hope can suck pretty much. Sometimes it feels like hope is laughing at us when we are at our lowest. On the other hand it is Hope what helps us up again after falling down. Hope encourages us to try again and not to give up.

Great observation Sappho. Thank you as always for your comments. xo

This piece is raw, visceral, and unapologetically confrontational. It dismantles the concept of hope, stripping it of its romanticized veneer and exposing it as a double-edged force—both a motivator and a manipulator. The repetition and aggressive tone amplify the frustration, challenging the reader to confront their own beliefs about hope's role in their lives. It’s a rebellion against blind faith, a demand for introspection, and a stark reminder that the mind is both a sanctuary and a battlefield. Cheers my friend.

PAR! This is one of the most thorough explanations of my poetry I've ever seen. DAMN! Your comments here are better then my poem. Thank you my dear friend!!!

I have my moments. Big hugs.