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still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core
of each cell to its limitless
thresholdlessness
of an ecstasy
(all started…
with deafeningly burning silence
this morning.. with an unbearably
mounting humidity.. sucking away
the meagre moistness of these
spirited skins still holding calm
a dry desiccating killer spell
that only can bring on
a pr(a/e)yed upon violence
..a needful rioting March
of the stormy foreplaying
winds .. in a maddeningly
blowing whistle amidst
the blinding cyclonic
swirling high sandy airs
even the gigantic teak leaves
.. are in as if a cursive befallen..
a swift rotational descending
as .. mammoth gravity butterflies
in a feathery soft touching
a total sweep over arousal
all over the widen parched up
hungering naked grounds.. )
now in a
wanton chaos
moaning in a non-husky
crunchiness .. as sharply
brittle~ breaking dry leaves
& the drumming hard echoes
of the first channeling in crop
in the heavenly transplanting
rains ..
onto these waiting porosities ..
seeding.. in deep breathing metal
fusional acoustical symphonies
an amorous pheromonal
clamour.. in an uprising
revolutionary petrichor
overbrimming the vasculars
rushes in an orgasmic outpour
enlivening the senses
a rejuvenating rebirth
when still the show
is still on and on
the r a i n
now .. flexing in as
a used to ‘intensities’
of you.. in a steadied
lucid state of a divine
drunkenness
in all silence
a saint .. this rain
am (suddenly mutatingly made)
an equatorial evergreen.. a densing
lush.. an Amazonian rainforest
in a humble disposition
bearing the soulful you
as coppery budding leafy coffee showers
as fairy pinkish blushing cherry blossoms
as pre-monsoonal ripen red kissed mango fruition
us
l o v e
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core
of each cell to its limitless
thresholdlessness
of an ecstasy
(all started…
with deafeningly burning silence
this morning.. with an unbearably
mounting humidity.. sucking away
the meagre moistness of these
spirited skins still holding calm
a dry desiccating killer spell
that only can bring on
a pr(a/e)yed upon violence
..a needful rioting March
of the stormy foreplaying
winds .. in a maddeningly
blowing whistle amidst
the blinding cyclonic
swirling high sandy airs
even the gigantic teak leaves
.. are in as if a cursive befallen..
a swift rotational descending
as .. mammoth gravity butterflies
in a feathery soft touching
a total sweep over arousal
all over the widen parched up
hungering naked grounds.. )
now in a
wanton chaos
moaning in a non-husky
crunchiness .. as sharply
brittle~ breaking dry leaves
& the drumming hard echoes
of the first channeling in crop
in the heavenly transplanting
rains ..
onto these waiting porosities ..
seeding.. in deep breathing metal
fusional acoustical symphonies
an amorous pheromonal
clamour.. in an uprising
revolutionary petrichor
overbrimming the vasculars
rushes in an orgasmic outpour
enlivening the senses
a rejuvenating rebirth
when still the show
is still on and on
the r a i n
now .. flexing in as
a used to ‘intensities’
of you.. in a steadied
lucid state of a divine
drunkenness
in all silence
a saint .. this rain
am (suddenly mutatingly made)
an equatorial evergreen.. a densing
lush.. an Amazonian rainforest
in a humble disposition
bearing the soulful you
as coppery budding leafy coffee showers
as fairy pinkish blushing cherry blossoms
as pre-monsoonal ripen red kissed mango fruition
us
l o v e
Published 22nd Mar 2025
Author's Note
Inspired by the thunder-storming March pre-monsoonal rain today .. lashing down here in all cooling wave over the burnt lands n souls .. after all the soaring heat spell . this march to june rains are also called cherry blossom/ coffee/ mango showers .
image: web. cherry blossom in rain
song link at top: could only think of this haunting rainy love tune.. of a #GVPrakashkumar musical from 2021 Tamil film ,'jail'.
image: web. cherry blossom in rain
song link at top: could only think of this haunting rainy love tune.. of a #GVPrakashkumar musical from 2021 Tamil film ,'jail'.
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22nd Mar 2025 10:38pm
Rain: the mother of growth and destruction.
Beautiful, uma.
hugs/love,
buddhakitty.
Beautiful, uma.
hugs/love,
buddhakitty.
Yes true bk.. rain .. as Shiva .. the birth n death .. in a fullness circle..all my love ♥️n hugs to you dear bk .. will be missing you greatly as du shuts down sooner .. :(
23rd Mar 2025 1:56am
Love the transcendental energy here that lifts me into the clouds of love. There is magical essence of land and water mixing into a potion of ripened mango juice. A lovers raga from the strings of a sitar melody dancing like raindrops across my acoustical imagination.
John
John
23rd Mar 2025 5:36am
Beautifully penned, Uma. Into the list it belongs! A lovely read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
23rd Mar 2025 3:33pm
Wow! It opened up with a thunderclap and never stopped pouring divine imagery and encapsulating poetry!
23rd Mar 2025 3:35pm
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