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AN ADDICTION I CAN'T BREAK
I
don't remember when
I was first attracted to YOU.
A mental picture?
A poem?
A Comment?
BUT
somewhere and at
some time you became
"stuck" in my senses
and desires.
YOU
became a beautiful fantasy:
imagining holding YOU close,
scanning your face, mouth,
eyes....all of YOU.
I
feel your kisses, your touch;
the passion of your erotic responses
when we share unbridled passion.
YES,
YOU are an addiction in my fantasies
that I don't want to break. So PLEASE
keep teasing me. OKAY?
don't remember when
I was first attracted to YOU.
A mental picture?
A poem?
A Comment?
BUT
somewhere and at
some time you became
"stuck" in my senses
and desires.
YOU
became a beautiful fantasy:
imagining holding YOU close,
scanning your face, mouth,
eyes....all of YOU.
I
feel your kisses, your touch;
the passion of your erotic responses
when we share unbridled passion.
YES,
YOU are an addiction in my fantasies
that I don't want to break. So PLEASE
keep teasing me. OKAY?
Published 21st Mar 2025
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21st Mar 2025 7:17pm
Ah, the last line. I love it when the last line makes it all coalesce. Yes. The tease. The desire to tease and to be teased. That's the key to the fountain.
21st Mar 2025 8:30pm
Thank you for your gracious comment; it is very encouraging. Hugs and love, Oral
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