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IT'S NOT TOO BIG
AS
we share the
prize that is ready
for delivery; wondering
if it is too big...looking
closely and admiring it;
NO!
The new TV we just
purchased will fit in
the back of the car
if we let the seat down..
CAN'T
wait to get home and
plug it in.
we share the
prize that is ready
for delivery; wondering
if it is too big...looking
closely and admiring it;
NO!
The new TV we just
purchased will fit in
the back of the car
if we let the seat down..
CAN'T
wait to get home and
plug it in.
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Re. IT'S NOT TOO BIG
19th Mar 2025 7:55pm
You have a good imagination with words from beginning to end of what is a mystery in disguise 👏👊✍️👍
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Re: Re. IT'S NOT TOO BIG
19th Mar 2025 8:18pm
You have an amazing ability to see the hidden point. Bravo! Hugs and love, O
Re: Re. IT'S NOT TOO BIG
19th Mar 2025 8:36pm
Insight into things is a blessing in disguise as we exchange thoughts of the truth of the mind as it is the most powerful thing that we possess 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. IT'S NOT TOO BIG
20th Mar 2025 4:17am
Cleverly penned, Oral. Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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