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I See You're Awake
I see you're awake, Joey.
You're gawking at your reflection, Mrs. Lawrence.
Can't help it. Old habit.
Maybe I could help you break it.
Wait, Joey! Don't...! Oh, that feels good!
You're gawking at your reflection, Mrs. Lawrence.
Can't help it. Old habit.
Maybe I could help you break it.
Wait, Joey! Don't...! Oh, that feels good!
Published 15th Mar 2025
Author's Note
The title of this whole awesoku poem happens to be what a mature person says to a young friend while looking at a mirror.
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15th Mar 2025 8:06am
I can easily see the dialogue between the two in each line. Mind boggles at the scene the last line suggests - she mightily turned him on.
16th Mar 2025 00:52am
