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First, But Not Complete
Beneath the bloom of your new dawn,
A new life stirs—your first to spawn
In sacred times before her cry,
I touched your love that will not die.
Though deeper loves now call your heart,
I fucked your kind uncharted parts.
Congratulations soft and sweet,
For I was first, but not complete.
Your eyes are soft for what comes next,
But I’ll always be your faithful ex.
A new life stirs—your first to spawn
In sacred times before her cry,
I touched your love that will not die.
Though deeper loves now call your heart,
I fucked your kind uncharted parts.
Congratulations soft and sweet,
For I was first, but not complete.
Your eyes are soft for what comes next,
But I’ll always be your faithful ex.
Published 13th Mar 2025
Author's Note
I was her first time so it's surreal to see her married and pregnant.
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If I experienced the same as you did, I might be feeling the same.
One of DH Lawrence's former lovers was pictured with her first child which she described as result of her husband "slaking the desire" that Lawrence had raised in her while she was not yet married. You didn't father your old flame's child but your times with her may have set her on the path to its conclusion.
One of DH Lawrence's former lovers was pictured with her first child which she described as result of her husband "slaking the desire" that Lawrence had raised in her while she was not yet married. You didn't father your old flame's child but your times with her may have set her on the path to its conclusion.
