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afraid
after twenty days in icu I'm weak
barely cohesive
I'm afraid I'll die if I sleep
that's the truth
I fought so hard from the edge why?
barely cohesive
I'm afraid I'll die if I sleep
that's the truth
I fought so hard from the edge why?
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Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 2:10pm
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10th Mar 2025 3:32am
Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 2:44pm
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10th Mar 2025 3:32am
Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 3:48pm
Because you are worth it. Keep fighting Brenda, you have a beautiful heart and soul.
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Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 3:43am
Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 3:56pm
I can relate to this message of being afraid I know that feeling all to well as I deal with the cancers that I have yet it's what keeps me striving and pushing for it's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE living your best life and believing in thyself and GOD ALMIGHTY 😇🙏
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Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 3:44am
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10th Mar 2025 11:50am
I believe in you that you can make a bad situation a blessing in disguise for it's true that we have to learn to understand that it's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE living your best life still hoping and believing in your faith for you've come a long way for I know first hand you gotta keep on pushing and striving and moving forward with your life 👏💪 for you proven it to thyself for don't doubt thyself for you are more stronger than you think that's a fact each time when you look at your own reflection in the mirror at how far you have come for every day is a blessing in disguise 🙏💯👍👊🥰🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 11:56am
thank you Shaman I hope you get better I don't know why good people suffer but I wish the best for you 💕
Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 12:14pm
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and kindness for I've learned to look at life as always being a challenge to be better and feel better and understand that when I was given a second chance at life it was a blessing in disguise 🙏👏👊😁
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Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 5:01pm
You rock Brenda. Rob Zombie & I don't want you to give up!! Keep fighting my friend..xox
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Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 3:45am
Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 10:49pm
I feel this. you’re here. it’s ok to be weak…afraid…uncertain but here. sometimes that’s just gotta be enough.
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Re: Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 10:53pm
Re. afraid
9th Mar 2025 11:26pm
Re: Re. afraid
10th Mar 2025 00:06am
I'm hurting went into a coma came back swinging I wasn't alone though a crazy Native American named JIm with me let's say some things to take care of still 💕 thank you