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SURPRISING TASTE
I
had often wondered
what it would taste like.
When I first saw it, I was
impressed with its' smallness,
shape and beautiful color.
WHEN
I finally decided to imbibe
the outer skin was so tasty
and the deeper fruit was unique
and delicious.
I
have enjoyed eating kumquats
ever since. Meet me at the
Kissing Place and we'll eat
delicious kumquats...my mouth
is watering...PLEASE!
had often wondered
what it would taste like.
When I first saw it, I was
impressed with its' smallness,
shape and beautiful color.
WHEN
I finally decided to imbibe
the outer skin was so tasty
and the deeper fruit was unique
and delicious.
I
have enjoyed eating kumquats
ever since. Meet me at the
Kissing Place and we'll eat
delicious kumquats...my mouth
is watering...PLEASE!
Published 21st Feb 2025
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21st Feb 2025 4:04pm
Every time i hear the word Kumquats, I think of the WC Fields movie It's a gift. The customer is yelling at WC Fields, "WHERE ARE MY KUMQUATS" Fields is trying to accommodate everyone in his general store that he operates and owns. Classic!
Always a great piece of writing Oral.
Always a great piece of writing Oral.
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Thank you, my dear friend. I truly value your comments. Hugs and love, Oral
