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The Way of Love
(With AverageJoe)
If love has a place and way of being
I'm lost in the heaven of your eyes
As laughter fades into soft spun moments
Glances linger, golden as summers day
Shimmer, the warmth of your breath, near
Blurring, melting into a kiss
Parched, I drink of your love-soaked lips,
Your desire drenching me to the bone;
When the cosmos fades, leaving nothing
Save you and I, stranded on hope;
We will spend all of eternity with our limbs
Entwined in healing constellations
Your murmur, Love
The spell song of my desires
Forever bound within this moment
Now, as kisses rain, turn savage storm
Lightning flashing in our gaze
Fierce, drenched, sweet yielding flesh
A roiling ocean grappled by rough hewn hands
Your groans crash upon the shore
Of my raptured senses,
A tidal rush that sweeps away
The boundaries of a savored reality,
Leaving only the salty taste
Of ecstasy in its wake;
My throat sings a siren song
For you and only you
Love but wanderlust of the soul, found home
From first errant kiss to last shared breath
Beneath wondrous star strewn heavens
Yet, heaven pales to the beauty of your eyes
Kiss me, love me again
Let me be once more lost within their light
Published 15th Feb 2025
Author's Note
This was a collaboration with AverageJoe and I couldn’t be more pleased with the way it turned out! Thank you, AJ for lending your absolutely gorgeous writing to this project; I can’t wait for the next one! 💕
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15th Feb 2025 3:59pm
The pleasure was all mine. I really enjoyed getting to know you in the back and forth of making this happen. I'm sorry that I may have tarnished your good name, but your efforts here will certainly do wonders for mine! 😁😂
You're a very talented woman, Jenn. Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me. Im in your debt 🌼
You're a very talented woman, Jenn. Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me. Im in your debt 🌼
15th Feb 2025 4:01pm
I told him on his page that this was really good and I enjoyed the flow of it.;)) Great collab
16th Feb 2025 1:44am
That's lush and sensual. It's a really romantic and intense poem, full of vivid imagery. It captures that feeling of being completely swept away by passion.
16th Feb 2025 10:01am
Dear J and AJ,
The blending of voices is seamless. When two extraordinary talents work together the outcome is always amazing and this is no exception. The both of you have always been able to express human emotion and behavior exquisitely. The beauty in this piece regarding love and how it feels in that particular moment of realization and appreciation seems to transcend space and time. Outstanding collab.
H🌷
The blending of voices is seamless. When two extraordinary talents work together the outcome is always amazing and this is no exception. The both of you have always been able to express human emotion and behavior exquisitely. The beauty in this piece regarding love and how it feels in that particular moment of realization and appreciation seems to transcend space and time. Outstanding collab.
H🌷
17th Feb 2025 3:20am
Wow. Like Honoria said, your voices blend well together. Each lines feels breathless, weaving right into the next, like the meeting of two minds.
Great work you two.
Great work you two.
