Greed And Lust

Love that opening line Damian and all what followed ❤️

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Excellent piece Damian. Your writes always inspire!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

great write dearest Damian I understand about the rhythm problem but sometimes being a little offbeat is good this sends a message 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Crimsin. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I'm always a little out of time anyways, I always jump back in at some point. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

yep the nightmare to those lying dark  monsters .. you words are a grim warning.. for a needful awakening friend .. loved the rhyme n piercing words.. great write Damian xx

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. I'm glad you enjoyed the write, my friend. I agree. Appreciate you.

Damian

Words of wisdom and truth yet beneath the surface of the truth is the truth of what is happening in the thickness of the darkness hiding behind the mask of a disguise as greed is corruption and lust is what happens before close doors 🚪🤔

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. You're spot on, as always. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.

Damian

Respect Brother Poet and friend 🙏👊

Excellent work... powerful n intense 👏

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Dreamz. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Goodness needs to know more about corruption than corruption knows about itself in order for goodness to prevail.

Excellent write!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, MS. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. I agree wholeheartedly. Appreciate you.

Damian  

The ending does not seem forced. I like this light and dark themed piece

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Cool, I'm glad it didn't seemed forced. Appreciate you.

Damian

The last line says it all. BRAVO. Hugs and love, Oral

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Oral. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Flows like a river. Impressive grey tones.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There are days I just want to throw dishes at a concrete wall over the greed going on. It's disheartening to the extreme. Keep musing. As Shrek says "better out than in"

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. I hear you. Nice, Shrek quote. Appreciate you.

Damian

Going to echo Pete: that first line is amazing.

It's the tone for a profound piece, my friend. I appreciate you 🙏🏻

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I loved that line as well. Appreciate you.

Damian