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lusty
come into my darkness deeply and really see me for who I am
desolate of faith, my kind doesn't mix with you
I saw you far off and I was intrigued
but my honesty says, you'd regret me
perhaps you already do
keening despair, you heard me weeping and you came in closer
freaky feeling sabotages, everytime
our need overcomes and we have to have a taste
dreadful lust, my body pushes me into your stoic sex
undulating within me, a great desire for your masculine
my vulnerability goes into hiding
but with a stare you penetrate her
pinning me to the moment, I know I can deny you nothing
filthy feelings, you bring out the masochist
who will bring out the worst in you
driving you to your Sadistic end
and you will know me then
when you feel you might snap, you'll get my submission
but not until you've proven your greed, for my womanhood
then my heart will crown you Master, over my dominion
Published 10th Feb 2025
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10th Feb 2025 7:24pm
10th Feb 2025 7:25pm
10th Feb 2025 8:35pm
A beautiful write - a declaration in offer of conquest and sweet surrender. Very nice!
11th Feb 2025 1:52am
10th Feb 2025 9:10pm
11th Feb 2025 1:53am
Although it is a sad work suggesting emptiness and helplessness,...
... it is a lustful void that tries hard to be sensually interesting.
And I tried to have an intuitive grasp for this comment.
... it is a lustful void that tries hard to be sensually interesting.
And I tried to have an intuitive grasp for this comment.
11th Feb 2025 1:53am
I think you did beautifully at capturing the essence of this write thank you graciously dearest Marks 💕
15th Feb 2025 11:10pm
11th Feb 2025 1:50am
Uncommonly universal.
There is this intersection.....edging semantics.
Submission begins with dominating self.....
There is this intersection.....edging semantics.
Submission begins with dominating self.....
11th Feb 2025 1:55am
hello dearest RT good evening thank you for reading deeply for the shifting undertones of this write 💕have a great night...
11th Feb 2025 6:23pm
Hi Brenda, you inspire me... I am so sorry I have been at such a distance for so long. My life has been chaotic...
I hope it's okay if I share what my mind did with this inspiration...
Step into my chaos, let me see you for who you really are.
A reckless storm of desire, untamed and unashamed,
I know it seems we don’t belong in the same world.
But I can’t stop wanting you -
A dark curiosity pulls you to me, and I know you’re intrigued.
Maybe you regret me already, but that only makes it sweeter.
I hear your heartbeat from a distance, and it calls to me.
You think you can resist this? You can't.
My touch pulls you in, and my darkness won’t let go,
We need this -- need each other -- so let’s indulge.
Your power only makes me want to show you how far I’ll go.
My body aches for you, a craving that makes my hunger grow.
Your stillness drives me mad with want,
But when you look at me, it’s as if you want to tear me apart.
I’m not afraid to lose control; I want you to take it all.
In this moment, you know nothing is off-limits.
I’m your intense addiction, the darkness you crave.
My body bends to you, but it’s my mind you’ll have to break.
You think you can make me submit?
First, prove you can handle me, let me test your limits.
I’ll give you everything -- my body, my submission,
But first, make me beg for it, make me crave every part of you.
Then, when you’ve earned it,
You’ll have my heart, my soul, and every inch of my power,
And you'll understand what it means to own someone.
I hope it's okay if I share what my mind did with this inspiration...
Step into my chaos, let me see you for who you really are.
A reckless storm of desire, untamed and unashamed,
I know it seems we don’t belong in the same world.
But I can’t stop wanting you -
A dark curiosity pulls you to me, and I know you’re intrigued.
Maybe you regret me already, but that only makes it sweeter.
I hear your heartbeat from a distance, and it calls to me.
You think you can resist this? You can't.
My touch pulls you in, and my darkness won’t let go,
We need this -- need each other -- so let’s indulge.
Your power only makes me want to show you how far I’ll go.
My body aches for you, a craving that makes my hunger grow.
Your stillness drives me mad with want,
But when you look at me, it’s as if you want to tear me apart.
I’m not afraid to lose control; I want you to take it all.
In this moment, you know nothing is off-limits.
I’m your intense addiction, the darkness you crave.
My body bends to you, but it’s my mind you’ll have to break.
You think you can make me submit?
First, prove you can handle me, let me test your limits.
I’ll give you everything -- my body, my submission,
But first, make me beg for it, make me crave every part of you.
Then, when you’ve earned it,
You’ll have my heart, my soul, and every inch of my power,
And you'll understand what it means to own someone.
12th Feb 2025 2:15pm
hello beautiful Kristina I'm happy to have inspired such a sexy poem from you... you are beautiful to me... good morning I hope you have been doing well admist the chaos...you always surprise me in a great way I deeply cherish your thoughts thank you lovely lady
