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my favorite color is black and blue

she looks good in red
but I prefer her in bruises
my mark on her skin
art created by hunger
poetry written in whispers
and bite marks�

Written by Ambjr

Published 5th Feb 2025

#lust #passion #sex

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Re. my favorite color is black and blue

KristinaX

5th Feb 2025 3:53pm

I do love a good inspiration...

you want me more when I am bleeding, red
marked in bruises, you love black and blue
canvas of my skin, such a beautiful view
bruises as art reflect your darkened heART
the poetry of pain written in tears, so right
imprinting bite marks, a perverse delight
in this dance is the tales of your swings
and you know to this I will always cling

I definitely connected with this one, like a dominant hand connects with a bratty sub...
making her beg... then roughly putting her sassy mouth to good use.
I am terrible at rhyming normally but I take it as comes... not perfect but feels okay here I think. :p