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This is jimmy
Deer Aftersixdalleema
I like your storieees
My freind live nearbye says that u have a snake
I have a dog. Hes name is Rocky
Winter recesss soon. wood like to come over and have my dog eat your snake
Let my no
Your freind jimmy
I like your storieees
My freind live nearbye says that u have a snake
I have a dog. Hes name is Rocky
Winter recesss soon. wood like to come over and have my dog eat your snake
Let my no
Your freind jimmy
Author's Note
Jimmy is 8 years old and enjoys animals. He also loves ASD's poetry.
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4th Feb 2025 3:29pm
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4th Feb 2025 3:32pm
I think he meant if his dog can meet your snake. Jimmy's spelling isn't so great.
Thanks ASD, I'll let him know.
Thanks ASD, I'll let him know.
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4th Feb 2025 3:34pm
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4th Feb 2025 3:36pm
Both Jimmy n Timmy are speaking such truthful innocence in your posted sweet poems Keith .. good novelistic conveyance :)
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5th Feb 2025 10:02am
Jimmy is like children should be; innocent and honest, speaking out loud whatever crosses their mind. Great job, Keith!
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