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plain to see
stone dropped
in water
ripples echo out
than fade
life,
time,
our stones,
water.
Published 22nd Jan 2025
| Edited 23rd Jan 2025
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22nd Jan 2025 12:20pm
A serene and contemplative poem!
Your words beautifully capture the fleeting nature of life and time, using the imagery of a stone dropped in water to convey the ripple effect of our existence.
The phrase "plain to see" invites the reader to observe the simple yet profound truth of life's impermanence.
Your words beautifully capture the fleeting nature of life and time, using the imagery of a stone dropped in water to convey the ripple effect of our existence.
The phrase "plain to see" invites the reader to observe the simple yet profound truth of life's impermanence.
22nd Jan 2025 12:23pm
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