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Practice Bars 3

Quite pleasing, I have mastered rhyme rooks.
Skies bleeding science after y'all shook.
My feelings, I don't have them all, look.
Like reading, Isaac Asimov books.

Guised greetings might have masked divine crooks.
Dice leading pirates after spines stood.
Try scheming heights we passed in times took.
Price pleading, private passions might push.

Bright beaming binds the blatherskite foot.
Lines weaving lying lavish like hoof.
Wine, wheat, and rice Saturn giant sook.
Rye seedling blight have acid nights cooked.

Prized meaning might have bastardized brook.
Rife reeling tries to catch a live hook.
Sight-seeing Simon's stab and wind nook.
Signs eating diet scabs the grime gook.

Jive really sliced an apple pie put.
Find demons fight to capture ply hood.
Tripe treason, tyrant tavern tides touch.
Ripe reasons ration rappers, rights, roots.

Minds dreaming life actualized good.
Rise freely livened as your God could.
Christ even died by sacrifice would.
Kind being tied to Sabbath tries us.
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Author's Note
Just some experimenting with an exhausting 9-syllable scheme rhyme, 4 times in a bar, for 6 bars.  I could've tried to make it 32 lines and 8 bars, but I kind of ran out of steam, and I may finish it some other time.  Hope you enjoy!
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