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Broken
Within my flesh
My soul is torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
My soul is torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
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Re. Broken
19th Jan 2025 1:49pm
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19th Jan 2025 3:43pm
good morning dearest Visions this is really beautiful Keith it's so heartfelt ❤️
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19th Jan 2025 7:10pm
Awesome! Happy to hear that you enjoyed this piece. Thanks Brenda. xo
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20th Jan 2025 3:12am
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20th Jan 2025 12:18pm
It captures the raw intensity of living with the awareness of mortality, where every breath is both a testament to life and a step closer to death.
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20th Jan 2025 12:20pm
Your comments here are priceless. I appreciate them greatly. Thanks my dear friend.
Re. Broken
21st Jan 2025 00:34am
Dear K,
The purity in this piece had me thinking how fragile being human truly is. There is so much up-hill muck to live through every day and you express this exquisitely well. H🌷
The purity in this piece had me thinking how fragile being human truly is. There is so much up-hill muck to live through every day and you express this exquisitely well. H🌷
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21st Jan 2025 10:15am
Thank you Honoria. We are fragile. I appreciate the kind words here.
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22nd Jan 2025 6:56pm