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Flip!
She's a work of art
She brightens up my day
She's my Queen of hearts
I love her in every way
(Then... She slept with me best mate)
She's an ugly fart
Causing me affray
She broke me bleedin' heart
How could she betray
She brightens up my day
She's my Queen of hearts
I love her in every way
(Then... She slept with me best mate)
She's an ugly fart
Causing me affray
She broke me bleedin' heart
How could she betray
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Re. Flip!
12th Jan 2025 8:41am
Cleverly penned, Pete. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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12th Jan 2025 9:54am
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12th Jan 2025 12:07pm
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12th Jan 2025 8:18pm
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Re. Flip!
12th Jan 2025 9:08pm
Now you know and acknowledgment gives you power to move on. Hugs and love, Oral
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12th Jan 2025 10:32pm
Re. Flip!
13th Jan 2025 00:41am
Dear P,
I super appreciated the light heartedness of this write. Just the ticket for levity tonight. H🌷
I super appreciated the light heartedness of this write. Just the ticket for levity tonight. H🌷
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13th Jan 2025 10:20am
Re. Flip!
13th Jan 2025 10:13am
So very clever, love the flip in this one. Your posts always bring me smiles 😍
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13th Jan 2025 10:21am
Re. Flip!
18th Jan 2025 4:22pm
One of the things I love about your writing is that I never know where you're going to take us! 😂
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