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Keyhole To My Heart
There is a keyhole to my heart
though there is no key holder.
A keyhole to the wonders I dream of us,
wonders that only exist within my mind.
This door to my soul locked and windowless,
you beg to enter even if only for a glimpse.
though there is no key holder.
A keyhole to the wonders I dream of us,
wonders that only exist within my mind.
This door to my soul locked and windowless,
you beg to enter even if only for a glimpse.
Published 11th Jan 2025
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11th Jan 2025 6:42pm
I love the use of the Keyhole metaphor. This shows a longing to be together. Enjoyed this
13th Jan 2025 4:27pm
Intriguing and intimate language explores themes of vulnerability and connection.
"A poignant and introspective poem that explores the vulnerability of opening one's heart."
Congratulations Gothic
"A poignant and introspective poem that explores the vulnerability of opening one's heart."
Congratulations Gothic
13th Jan 2025 5:14pm
Apt analysis and thank you. I seem to focus more on imagery than the message. I don’t know which is better or maybe I’m just good at balancing both. Again, thank you.
