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So this is one of your best! It gives me an idea 💡 hehe.

thanks a lot daniel...RL addition from your side, it's a great joy for me...

Very well written and very sad. I agree with gothsurrealism, one of your best. You have really captured the need/want to be loved and the reality and hurt of rejection. I think the last line is my favourite “and my heart fell on the ground like a dried flower...”. It reminds me of one of the first poems of yours that I read about giving a boy a letter and he threw it away. Keep writing, keep searching for your person.
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hey T
your words made me emotional...wel am glad you remembered that poem of letter... that too is a poem full of emotions... N yes I believe that most of the time we like the things which are impossible to get.. But yes it is also true that we cannot stop loving someone...If the feeling is true... thank you so much for that lovely rose... ❤

Dimpy this is beautiful, and I felt how sad you were. <3

thanks very much dearest fia... i get sad, but yes i control myself...If I feel that playing my role in someone's life is unnecessary... thanks for RL entry... ❤

Damn, that was intense.  I enjoyed reading this girl.

LJ

hey LJ
hope you're doing well dear
nice to see you after so long...
thank you for your nice comment.. :)

I don't even know my wants after the life I've had.  I reach out and try and it either kicks me in the ass or I love it so much - I drop it and it shatters.

PJ
like I told someone just now that one should never lose hope... but one should not have hope even from the wrong person... we'll life is very beautiful but sometimes it also gifts us a bouquet of thorns.. but if you maintain positive thinking and keep moving ahead then again flowers can bloom in your path.. .

Brilliantly penned, dimpy. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.

Damian

thanks D
for your comment n RL entry... :)