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Dreamscape #56
A waterfall pours from mossy green rocks
From smooth rocky hills
Into a warm shallow pool
The sound of the plunging water
Merges with birdsong
The sun is bright, the air is warm
You float in the pool
The smell of roast crab and toast
Fills your nose
The pool is calm
The day is long
Drifting in clear blue water
By bright green mossy rocks
Warm yellow sun
Published 10th Jan 2025
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11th Jan 2025 1:48am
I'll take this dream any day.
Especially the roast crab.
Couple of beers
Perfect summer day
Score
BIG LIKE
Especially the roast crab.
Couple of beers
Perfect summer day
Score
BIG LIKE
11th Jan 2025 6:37pm
Thanks for reading.
I think I need a dessert island.
With stores of rum and a fishing rod.
I think I was meant to be a pirate shipwrecked in the Caribbean.
James
I think I need a dessert island.
With stores of rum and a fishing rod.
I think I was meant to be a pirate shipwrecked in the Caribbean.
James
11th Jan 2025 2:29pm
11th Jan 2025 6:38pm
That's one of the reasons why I wrote it.
To be a calming scene.
Glad you got that from it.
Regards James
To be a calming scene.
Glad you got that from it.
Regards James
Anonymous
16th Jan 2025 8:10am
I was in the poem, I was in that warm air floating on the water. This was beautiful.
16th Jan 2025 3:55pm
Thanks for your kind words.
I aimed to take the reader somewhere peaceful.
Kind regards
James
I aimed to take the reader somewhere peaceful.
Kind regards
James
