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Thoughts
Is the end, truly the end
Or is it an excuse to try something new?
If you dip your toe in the darkness of me
Why test, dive in. Fear has no place here
There is no reverse shift
In this car only the rear view mirror shows what's behind
Here is wood,a pick and six strings.
Smooth the wood
Tightened the strings
Pic away until I sing.
Or is it an excuse to try something new?
If you dip your toe in the darkness of me
Why test, dive in. Fear has no place here
There is no reverse shift
In this car only the rear view mirror shows what's behind
Here is wood,a pick and six strings.
Smooth the wood
Tightened the strings
Pic away until I sing.
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Random thoughts
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10th Jan 2025 6:51pm
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11th Jan 2025 1:43am
enjoyed reading your random thoughts.
the brain does roam.
thank you for sharing
the brain does roam.
thank you for sharing
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11th Jan 2025 1:44am
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11th Jan 2025 5:13am
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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11th Jan 2025 10:48am
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11th Jan 2025 3:04pm
"Is the end, truly the end
Or is it an excuse to try something new?"
I enjoyed reading your thoughts, Fia. This line I found particularly profound. 😊
Or is it an excuse to try something new?"
I enjoyed reading your thoughts, Fia. This line I found particularly profound. 😊
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11th Jan 2025 10:18pm
The last verse has a nice singsong quality to it. The poem as a whole feels like something I needed to hear right now, feeling as though I’m stagnating a bit.
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