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Be Wholly
The person you choose to be in this world
Be wholly
The things you choose to give of yourself
Give completely
When you find a man needing love,
Give more than expected
When death calls your name
Follow in peace
Be wholly
The things you choose to give of yourself
Give completely
When you find a man needing love,
Give more than expected
When death calls your name
Follow in peace
Published 9th Jan 2025
| Edited 10th Jan 2025
Author's Note
A rewrite of something my mother wrote for me in Feb. of 2022. So much has changed since then. I edited the photo from one I found in her files obviously snapped by one of her boyfriends not long before her death.
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9th Jan 2025 8:53pm
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When you find a man needing love,
Give more than expected
When you find a man needing love,
Give more than expected
10th Jan 2025 12:04pm
