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Be Wholly

The person you choose to be in this world  
Be wholly  
The things you choose to give of yourself  
Give completely  
When you find a man needing love,  
Give more than expected  
When death calls your name  
Follow in peace
Written by Nizana (Lauryn)
Published | Edited 10th Jan 2025
Author's Note
A rewrite of something my mother wrote for me in Feb. of 2022. So much has changed since then. I edited the photo from one I found in her files obviously snapped by one of her boyfriends not long before her death.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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