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Be Wholly

The person you choose to be in this world  
Be wholly  
The things you choose to give of yourself  
Give completely  
When you find a man needing love,  
Give more than expected  
When death calls your name  
Follow in peace
Written by Nizana (Lauryn)
Published | Edited 10th Jan 2025
Author's Note
A rewrite of something my mother wrote for me in Feb. of 2022. So much has changed since then. I edited the photo from one I found in her files obviously snapped by one of her boyfriends not long before her death.
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