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sky tonight

deja-vu
a depressing chat
with a cab driver
as I sat

what can I do?
consult I Ching...
it says to me
to go within -

here I lie
as I write
I saw Venus
in moonlight

Jupiter too
was in the sky
a magic moment
passing by

now here I lie
late at night
remembering
the sky tonight...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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