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Sunday January 5th
Mommy, come look!!
Daddy pointed a gun at his face and fired it!
He won't get up
Mommy, he's funny looking, come look!!
Daddy pointed a gun at his face and fired it!
He won't get up
Mommy, he's funny looking, come look!!
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Re. Sunday January 5th
5th Jan 2025 10:09pm
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5th Jan 2025 11:02pm
Re. Sunday January 5th
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Yesterday 3:20am
Holy fuck…
That was my first reaction.
Second thought: Sunday Bloody Sunday by U2
And now I can’t get that song and this image out of my head. Thanks a fucking lot. I’m about ready to get into bed, lol.
Make mental note: do NOT read Keith’s poems before bed.
I’ll save them for morning ;)
That was my first reaction.
Second thought: Sunday Bloody Sunday by U2
And now I can’t get that song and this image out of my head. Thanks a fucking lot. I’m about ready to get into bed, lol.
Make mental note: do NOT read Keith’s poems before bed.
I’ll save them for morning ;)
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Yesterday 10:10am
HA! Yeah read my stuff in the morning. Sunday Bloody Sunday, good song by U2. One of the the very few tracks I like from the band. Thanks Mary.
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Yesterday 5:15am
s very dark write dearest Keith I think there is always some truth woven with fantasy...this is great expression of emotion 💕
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Yesterday 10:11am
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Yesterday 7:22am
Ending of the year came soon...and my death would surly follow.
No more dealing with my twisted family. Their macabre cabal I now
no longer follow.
My opulent fiendish effeminate brother with his endless barrage of
crooks and hooligans. May set their flag atop my Dads cindery collapsed
legacy scene. Like the iconic Iwo Jima flag raising! Yet in this case a twisted
flag made of my Dads translucent form with no guts nor skeleton to be seen..
For thankfully my Government shall eu•tha•nize my benefits of disability and
I shall follow. Not to be alive after the outcome and showdown of my bitter
family ripping themselves to shreds over the scraps that will be left. Only
to be even more hungered and HOLLOW like the mythical Windigo demon of the woods!!!
Who knows by then the economy itself may implode and it will be all for nothing!
What a waste and such a limited imagination for worthlessness!! Absolute
energy wasted for an epitaph made of suffering!!! Such a gross display of
pathetic negligence!
No more dealing with my twisted family. Their macabre cabal I now
no longer follow.
My opulent fiendish effeminate brother with his endless barrage of
crooks and hooligans. May set their flag atop my Dads cindery collapsed
legacy scene. Like the iconic Iwo Jima flag raising! Yet in this case a twisted
flag made of my Dads translucent form with no guts nor skeleton to be seen..
For thankfully my Government shall eu•tha•nize my benefits of disability and
I shall follow. Not to be alive after the outcome and showdown of my bitter
family ripping themselves to shreds over the scraps that will be left. Only
to be even more hungered and HOLLOW like the mythical Windigo demon of the woods!!!
Who knows by then the economy itself may implode and it will be all for nothing!
What a waste and such a limited imagination for worthlessness!! Absolute
energy wasted for an epitaph made of suffering!!! Such a gross display of
pathetic negligence!
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Yesterday 10:12am
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Yesterday 7:26am
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fap53qmYodg
Cool music track to go with my poem reply. LOL!
Cool music track to go with my poem reply. LOL!
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Yesterday 10:12am
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Yesterday 12:54pm
The right music makes the writing kick ass....dude. I been
story telling since 1989!!!!!!!!!!! You rock on!
story telling since 1989!!!!!!!!!!! You rock on!
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