The Cracked Glass

Now I like that very much Fia! Well-constructed and it flows. 😃

Thank you Daniel and for the RL. :))

Tight piece. Well written Fia!

Thank you, Keith I appreciate it;))

I feel as though the last line should be “For I see what others overlook” for maximum effect, but I like this poem, it’s creepy and effective. “The sweat of reality” is a nicely nasty phrase in particular.

Thank you. I will take your suggestion. :))

I was drawn to this line especially, 'Minute cracks at the seam.' Beware they don't become bigger cracks. 😊

Thank you. It is so easy to see the glass but further inspection you can see what is actually happening.;))

Brilliantly composed, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Nice flow balanced by beautiful wordplay. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Thank you so much my friend.:))

You amaze me with the new and fresh subject you COME UP with. Have a great write day. Hugs and love, Oral

Thank you Oral. You too my friend;))