Neglected

so much you say & touch upon .. the truth.. the way that just  the loud words n eyes  mislead yet still they are as if the societal glimmery norms in acceptance .. in grandeur nod to the lies .. over the felt truth, which us more the pains & sacrifices. Neglected be it.. in the course of unlocking realising the truth, rather the crowing lies.. truth is soul’s expression & need not be fior any impression .. just me from your superb pithy philosophical truth here Damian.. xx

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Dear DL,

I enjoyed this deep dive into an abyss of thoughts and wisdom. I had to read it twice to hear the oracle speak. In so doing there was greater personal meaning. “Balance is found on a road where wisdom lies” B-rill-iant!!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. Honored to make your RL. I loved that line as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

keep submitting those thoughts

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jimmy. I will, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

So true Damian, you always hit the nail on the head with these pieces ♥️

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I loved it. In this world it's hard not to feel neglected.
I love" the raven has become smitten with the dove"
You have great thoughts Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. I loved that line as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

"Soft rain falling inside this spiritual theater"

That line has me enthralled. I think of rain as nourishment for growth. Too much or too hard & the deluge can muddy or destroy but soft rain is perfect. And the spiritual theater...amazing. This entire poem is a brilliant piece of musing. That line though, I live right there. If I had a hat, it would come off to this one

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Honored to make your RL. I loved that line as well. I'm so glad you enjoyed the write, my friend. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

Damian  

The spitball in baseball has a lot of transference to life we are about to see in America.  It won't be pretty.  Illegal at best.
Frightening at the worst.

Keep slugging Damian

BIG LIKE

I hear that. Gaylord Perry, scares me less than future leadership. Or lack there of. lol. But I get where you were going. Of course I was never in the batters box  against, Perry. I might think differently had I been. Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. Appreciate you.

Damian

The ideas you have on this poem are unbelievable. Real, honest & you. Excellent description with so many truths we all can relate to. Nice work Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This has me thinking that your flow is so well thought out. The crow and the dove really is good how you put to symbols of massagers out. Dove is love and Crow warning. I like this

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I loved that line as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Again, great job in your presentation.  I like the theme of this, because it can be interpretated as a need for meekness.  Sometimes, you do have to be careful in all that you do and say around certain people, because they can and will become jealous, covetous, or envious, especially if it's a competition of intellect, pride, and/or ego.  That's kind of what I pick up from this, heh.  It's like you've been through the motions of logic and definition, and applying it to emotion and expression, but there is always someone out there looking to trip you up, and sometimes, it's just best to just be quiet, and endure through tough and challenging times.  In knowing that you know you're smart, but people always pointing a finger and trying to find flaw, can be a big-time struggle, especially for artists.  I can definitely relate, heh.  Anyway, that's just some of what I picked up on in this.  Maybe I'm just vainly reflecting my own struggle, heh.  Thanks for sharing.  To the list it goes!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Honored to make your RL. You're pretty spot on in your analysis, my friend. I'm glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Damian I like the way your mind works though I don't always understand it's depths perhaps that is the disconnect or neglect obviously you are appreciated by your peers I wonder if you're always understood that feeling gets me...deep thoughts 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Crimsin. All my writes are therapeutic to me. I have so many thoughts and questions, that I tinker with. Some I find answers for, some are works in progress. Some require a leap of faith. But there is always a spiritual vibe. Basically my mind never stops thinking, I write to keep my sanity more than anything. Sorry, for the tangent. I'm glad you enjoyed the write. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Scrumptious! My Poem of The Month - January 2025

Hugs!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. Honored to make your RL. Honored again, for the poem of the month nomination. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Speechless... you pack so much truth in every single line.

"Soft rain falling inside this spiritual theater" > though this one stood out.
This is a masterpiece of a poem, my friend, I appreciate you.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Honored to make your RL. I loved that line as well. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Well it's good to know you think it's a masterpiece, I'm always chasing my masterpiece. I might have finally done it. Appreciate you.

Damian