Great Catch! (Lapping it up)

You put a lot of thought into this piece. Bridging gaps and not looking backward but forward. Nicely done;))

Thank you, Fia. Yes, looking forward is a good way of describing this. It was one I had lying around in my submit queue for months but really felt it was about time I put it out there. 😊

Ahhh Billy...this is a fun read...:)

It's like a super horny Dr. Seuss who just didn't give a shit.

Lol. I've still gotta make that catch though. You do understand, don't you? 😉

Of course I do!

But you gotta make it a memorable time.

make the catch, and love life, at the same time.
those are 2 of the same.

This came at the perfect time, Billy. Thank you.

I have more bridges smoldering in my rear view than I care to count. I’m glad ours isn’t one of them. I remember this conversation.

I’ll meet you on that dock one day, coffee in hand. Bring your sunglasses cuz that’s all there’s gonna be, baby- sunshine. No room for storm clouds when it’s just you and me sipping coffee with our feet in the water and my head resting on your shoulder💋

Awwww, you remember. You make it sound so good! Thank you for your continued inspiration & everything, Mary. 😊

An amazing piece of erotica showing your talent. Looking forward to much more. Hugs and love, Oral

Very kind of you to say, Oral. Glad you were amazed. It's usually quite easy to write about amazing people, I find. 😁 🙏

YES! Truth to power. Oral

Thank you for letting me comment.  I'm really not your enemy. I hope you realize that. <3 great poem

Thank you, ASD.

Dude, what a fun and flirtatious piece.

LJ

Nice hearing from you, LJ. Thank you. It was an enjoyable piece to construct. It didn't take too long to formulate at all. 🤗

- Playful and flirtatious language explores themes of attraction and desire.
- Effective use of wordplay and clever turns of phrase.
"A playful and flirtatious poem that celebrates the thrill of attraction and connection

Thank you Numer90 for your nice words & opinion. Good to have you commenting on my page. 😊

Once again thanks for sharing this piece the pleasure is all mine.

Oh is that what you were refencing huh?
Well you know exactly where my mind is on that... lol
Being filled with ... * nevermind *

I'm ready to catch you too if you feel you're about to fall. I'm not sure where your mind is going on this particular poem, KristinaX but it is written from a purely innocent platonic angle. Granted, it's about the ultimate journey... wherever it may lead. Nice hearing from you again & thank you my good friend. 🤗

Wow nice to be back reading your fantastic poem well crafted. Love n muse on lady love yayy reads superbly by your rhyming poem. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Thanks Zaynab. Yes it rhymes rather well, this one.

Brilliantly penned, Billy. Great flow. Dig this. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Thank you, sir. I'm happy the way it turned out, to be fair. 😊