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Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
Published 4th Jan 2025
Author's Note
This poem developed from a conversation relating to how nothing ever happens without a certain amount of required effort! We're never goin' back baby! And when 'filling that sweet crack' I am of course referencing the hopeful bridging of the gap that divides us... the distance, the ocean, including that damn bridge! 😉
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4th Jan 2025 1:39pm
You put a lot of thought into this piece. Bridging gaps and not looking backward but forward. Nicely done;))
4th Jan 2025 1:52pm
Thank you, Fia. Yes, looking forward is a good way of describing this. It was one I had lying around in my submit queue for months but really felt it was about time I put it out there. 😊
4th Jan 2025 10:44pm
Ahhh Billy...this is a fun read...:)
It's like a super horny Dr. Seuss who just didn't give a shit.
It's like a super horny Dr. Seuss who just didn't give a shit.
Lol. I've still gotta make that catch though. You do understand, don't you? 😉
4th Jan 2025 10:52pm
Of course I do!
But you gotta make it a memorable time.
make the catch, and love life, at the same time.
those are 2 of the same.
But you gotta make it a memorable time.
make the catch, and love life, at the same time.
those are 2 of the same.
5th Jan 2025 5:06am
This came at the perfect time, Billy. Thank you.
I have more bridges smoldering in my rear view than I care to count. I’m glad ours isn’t one of them. I remember this conversation.
I’ll meet you on that dock one day, coffee in hand. Bring your sunglasses cuz that’s all there’s gonna be, baby- sunshine. No room for storm clouds when it’s just you and me sipping coffee with our feet in the water and my head resting on your shoulder💋
I have more bridges smoldering in my rear view than I care to count. I’m glad ours isn’t one of them. I remember this conversation.
I’ll meet you on that dock one day, coffee in hand. Bring your sunglasses cuz that’s all there’s gonna be, baby- sunshine. No room for storm clouds when it’s just you and me sipping coffee with our feet in the water and my head resting on your shoulder💋
5th Jan 2025 5:09am
Awwww, you remember. You make it sound so good! Thank you for your continued inspiration & everything, Mary. 😊
5th Jan 2025 10:16pm
An amazing piece of erotica showing your talent. Looking forward to much more. Hugs and love, Oral
5th Jan 2025 11:01pm
Very kind of you to say, Oral. Glad you were amazed. It's usually quite easy to write about amazing people, I find. 😁 🙏
5th Jan 2025 11:12pm
7th Jan 2025 00:26am
Thank you for letting me comment. I'm really not your enemy. I hope you realize that. <3 great poem
7th Jan 2025 00:27am
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Today 2:19am
Nice hearing from you, LJ. Thank you. It was an enjoyable piece to construct. It didn't take too long to formulate at all. 🤗
